Recap: The Fast Track

DoctorDisaster

DoctorDisaster

Recap: The Fast Track

March 10 2014


The crews of the RRW D'Galan and the USS Sally Ride have encountered a Dyson Ring inhabited by a mysterious metabeing -- a plant-based hive mind the size of a solar system. Powered by the constant sunlight of the ring, the plant intelligence (irreverently dubbed "Carl" by Captain Orenn) seems to combine neurally networked plants, nonsentient animal symbiotes, and the advanced technology of the ring itself. Its mind is powerful enough to create reality-warping effects like those used by the Q Continuum. It is conscious, and telepathic crew members of the exploration team have managed to contact it -- or at least make it aware of their presence. Two-way communication, however, has proven nearly impossible due to the vast difference in Carl's frame of reference.

Several days after making contact with the plant being, it began to use its reality-altering ability to move the starships instantaneously into the orbit of inhabited planets. This effect occurs with almost no warning, either for the crew of the ships or the people they find themselves visiting. The first time this occurred, the exploration group made peaceful contact with a species called the Spallans, who immediately sent an ambassador to immerse himself among the crew. His name is Derren, an attractive blue-skinned individual with a disarming curiosity, a preternatural knack for analyzing unfamiliar cultures, and a tendency to make ominous comments at odd moments in otherwise pleasant conversations.

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As soon as Derren had familiarized himself with the crew, the plant intelligence jumped the D'Galan and the Sally Ride back to its Dyson ring. The Romulans devised an early warning system to warn them of any more reality jumps, while the Starfleet crew tried to figure out why Carl was sending them on these jaunts. They hadn't made much progress when their second jump occurred.

The planet they arrived at this time was a lot less friendly than Spalla. The planet's upper atmosphere was thick with hull-shredding space debris and fortified with a network of mutually hostile war stations. The nearest station immediately attacked the strangers, assuming they were a new secret weapon being deployed by one of the planet's warring factions. The explorers attempted to escape, only to be bounced right back by another reality warp.



Seeing no other choice, they disabled the nearest station and began analyzing the conflict. The planet seems to be controlled by three rival militarized factions: the fundamentalist Legion of the Holy Order; the totalitarian Yelario Empire, and the decadent Kalandra Republic. Each holds central urban districts largely unaffected by the conflict, while war rages all around, turning their border regions into desolate wastelands. Derren theorized that the conflict was being artificially prolonged by a wealthy class in each faction that profited from it.

The bridge crews of the different ships were deadlocked on how best to proceed until a tightbeam signal began broadcasting a rogue message to them from one of the war zones. It seemed to be an attempt by a rebel element to contact the 'alien invaders' for assistance in defusing the conflict. Citing the Prime Directive, Orenn said that there was absolutely no way he would send his crew into such a dangerous area, even to discuss intervention in the planet's internal politics. Kimara, pointing out that her ship wasn't bound by the Prime Directive, resolved to send in an away team to contact the peace movement and hear what they had to say.

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Edited March 10 2014 by DoctorDisaster
Angel

Angelsilhouette

Re: Recap: The Fast Track

March 10 2014
(Niven Ring, credit where it's due. ;) )
Edited March 10 2014 by Angelsilhouette
DoctorDisaster

DoctorDisaster

Re: Recap: The Fast Track

March 10 2014
(I did snag the image from something Niven-related, but Dyson beat Niven to the concept by more than a decade. 'Sides, as there's now a Dyson sphere in the game, I figure that term requires less explanation. :p )
Zander Hawk

Zander_Hawk

Re: Recap: The Fast Track

March 11 2014
Reality warping effects like the Q oh my! Don't make it angry or it'll destroy your entire TV series! -I love your story btw.

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Angel

Angelsilhouette

Re: Recap: The Fast Track

March 11 2014
Quote by DoctorDisaster
(I did snag the image from something Niven-related, but Dyson beat Niven to the concept by more than a decade. 'Sides, as there's now a Dyson sphere in the game, I figure that term requires less explanation. :p )


(Very technically, I suppose, if by "concept" you meant orbital megastructure that surrounds a star. More precisely Dyson's concept was the sphere, Niven's Ringworld was the origin of the concept of a Ringworld. So saying Dyson Ring is about as accurate as saying Niven Discworld. It is incorrect and misleads people unfamiliar with the Ringworld. If someone is unfamiliar with a Niven Ring (very hard to imagine these days after Halo), but also has access to the internet, google/bing/wiki would not only offer a very quick explanation, but introduce them to a very good book. Mislabeling it a Dyson Ring has the unfortunate possibility that someone who doesn't know the Niven Ring will simply put 2 and 5 together, get 4 and never get to know the book which introduced the ring.

So use that Niven label, encourage people to grow and use their brains and curiosity, help them discover new and awesome things. :) )

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(Also, if you are afraid that some people will not only be ignorant of Niven and the Ringworld but also too lazy and/or cretinous to google it, you can also create a linked term, like: Niven Ringworld. Et Viola! Minds expanded! :D )
Edited March 11 2014 by Angelsilhouette
Zander Hawk

Zander_Hawk

Re: Recap: The Fast Track

March 11 2014
That's why I don't like adding images to posted stories, it avoids a mess and the copyright/patent/trademark, etc., police lol. However, the images enhance the story beautifully -perhaps when posting a story with images, animations, video and/or any media a table of citations or table of references should accompany a story (somewhere towards the end)

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Edited March 11 2014 by Zander_Hawk
Angel

Angelsilhouette

Re: Recap: The Fast Track

March 12 2014
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That's why I don't like adding images to posted stories, it avoids a mess and the copyright/patent/trademark, etc., police lol. However, the images enhance the story beautifully -perhaps when posting a story with images, animations, video and/or any media a table of citations or table of references should accompany a story (somewhere towards the end)

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(The images had nothing to do with it Zander. I read Ringworld when I was in middle school, learning about the Dyson Sphere from my father in the process, so I didn't need to even see the pictures to know what he was talking about. I simply feel that credit should be given where it is due. It's why I always feel uncomfortable when people talk about how "great" Thomas Edison was. I'm sure some folks might understand if I were to use an example that involved my branding one of Tesla's inventions with the name "Edison". It's not because of copyright/patent/trademark, it's about spreading misinformation which would not only prevent people from ever discovering Niven's Ringworld series, but have them saying things like "Dyson Ringworld" in mixed company, potentially causing public embarrassment if they are called out on it.

Also, there is never anything wrong with getting things right; the same can't be said about getting things wrong.)
Zander Hawk

Zander_Hawk

Re: Re: Recap: The Fast Track

March 12 2014
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That's why I don't like adding images to posted stories, it avoids a mess and the copyright/patent/trademark, etc., police lol. However, the images enhance the story beautifully -perhaps when posting a story with images, animations, video and/or any media a table of citations or table of references should accompany a story (somewhere towards the end)

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(The images had nothing to do with it Zander. I read Ringworld when I was in middle school, learning about the Dyson Sphere from my father in the process, so I didn't need to even see the pictures to know what he was talking about. I simply feel that credit should be given where it is due. It's why I always feel uncomfortable when people talk about how "great" Thomas Edison was. I'm sure some folks might understand if I were to use an example that involved my branding one of Tesla's inventions with the name "Edison". It's not because of copyright/patent/trademark, it's about spreading misinformation which would not only prevent people from ever discovering Niven's Ringworld series, but have them saying things like "Dyson Ringworld" in mixed company, potentially causing public embarrassment if they are called out on it.

Also, there is never anything wrong with getting things right; the same can't be said about getting things wrong.)


The images are connected to the issue, the subject matter that you initially spoke about inferred an issue relating to copyright/patent/trademarks. I still believe that it's always good practice to include a table of references at the bottom of anything written in a public forum-just to be safe. Now, on your recent post, your point of view is focused on the issue of "misinformation" to which I can't comment on, that's a heavy allegation the requires subject matter experts (or more knowledgeable people in general) on Dyson spheres and Ringworld -it's a debatable issue that I leave to the aforementioned. However, I must note that the initial post was a fictional episode within the Star Trek universe where Ringworld may not necessarily come into play or even mentioned versus a dissertation, publication or general discussion on Dyson Spheres where I could expect due credit to be provided during the course or body of the subject.

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Edited March 12 2014 by Zander_Hawk
DoctorDisaster

DoctorDisaster

Re: Recap: The Fast Track

March 17 2014
Oy. Exactly one wikipedia search later, here's Dyson in writing referring to a ring-shaped superstructure in 1960: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dyson_sphere#cite_ref-6 On the same page, Dyson is quoted saying that his thought experiment was inspired by superstructures in short stories written in the 30s. There's no such thing as originality, folks.

Frankly, I don't think that it really matters which name we associate with our fictional superstructures, so long as everybody knows what we're talking about. Both gents are equally deserving of a shout out. In the future, if I grab images from the 'net, I'll be sure to credit the source. :)
Angel

Angelsilhouette

Re: Recap: The Fast Track

March 17 2014
I was very ready to stand corrected then read section of the article you linked. Yes, Dyson does mention a ring, but according to your link, only to say that it would be mechanically impossible, going on to say that his vision was of a swarm of objects orbiting a star. So a Dyson Ring is a swarm of objects rather than the single megastructure envisaged by Larry Niven. Dyson was Leonardo Da Vinci to Niven's Igor Sikorsky. (Except no one will ever know if a Ringworld concept could come to fruition because humanity will, in all likelihood, fizzle out when the sun goes nova; the people and corporations who hold the majority of the Earth's currency simply will not see the profit in serious, dedicated space exploration until it is far too late.)


That said, described within the confines of the novel Ringworld is a Niven Ring with an inner Dyson Ring (orbiting between the Niven Ring and the sun, providing a diurnal cycle to the Ringworld.)