Review and Opinion

Hey,

I had been told that this is a place for people are doing story writing. I wouldn't mind a thought or two on how I am going so far.

BTW English in school wasn't my biggest and strongest friend when it come to spelling and grammar.

Also I will be attaching a character info about 4 of the character I have created.

That is a great story! Keep it up.

what are your thoughts on how the story line is going so far?

I like how it is moving. Present, past, back to present. There is a lot of detail. I do hope the hero saves his partner....somehow but it doesn't look like it is going to happen. I can't wait to see how it all plays out. I am ready for more :)

Thanks Darkaos.

Having some opinion on it does help a lot...

I am slightly stuck on what to go on with the rest of this story. For those that like story writing. Can I ask of those that story write for opinion on what they would like to see.

Heres a newly improved character info on the characters that are mainly mentioned in the story...

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Heres a newly improved character info on the characters that are mainly mentioned in the story...

Excellent Bio's!

Current update of my story writing..