"The Spirits of Ramok Nor" by @alimac30

Title: The Spirits of Ramok Nor
Author: @alimac30
Faction: Federation
Level Requirement: Any level

Author Notes:
I've just published this, my very first Foundry mission. Please give it a play and let me know what you think.

Any and all feedback very, very welcome.

Thanks!

Ali
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PS. At this early stage, you may need to be a Reviewer in order to find the misson in the "Community Authored" tab. Once a few people have played it, everyone should be able to see it.


Mission summary: Spirits are haunting an old Cardassian-built medical facility on Bajor. The terrified patients and staff fear the apparitions are the tormented souls of Bajorans tortured and killed at the facility during the Occupation. With the pain of Cardassian atrocities still raw after 50 years, Kai Kira has asked Starfleet to investigate...

[Author's notes: This is NOT a Devidian mission. Intended to be single-player; takes around an hour. It's more of an investigation than a shoot-'em-up; there are some baddies to shoot, but the focus is on the investigation.]

I've got to say that I absolutely loved this mission. It's very story driven so I wouldn't go into it expecting a lot of combat but if you want a great story here it is.

I'm not the best person when it comes to a lot of reading and not once during this mission did I feel that there was too much text.


The writing is great, it all feels very Trek and there's moments in the game that actually made me go through emotions.


I can't praise this mission enough, great ending, 10/10!

I can't thank you enough for the awesome feedback, Halish. Reviews have been pretty good in the first 48 hrs, so I'm completely chuffed that people like it :cheer:

Just played it - awesome work!



I really can't fault it, it was well-written, well-executed, interesting story... new & detailed maps...



Well done alimac!

I just read this and wanna play it but realised the server comes down in 20 mins so will try it another time.

check ya feedback Alimac, i just played it. Bloody brilliant m8, ya must have worked on it for ages.

So I'm finally getting around to playing Foundry missions and this was the first one I tried. Loved it Ali!

:pinch: SPOILER WARNING!!! :pinch:

I'm curious how you made the vortex with the floating "spirit". I sorta want to do something similar.

And on a tangent, does anyone have nay ideas on how to make a space hazard that isn't an explosion? I'm trying to recreate the "spatial anomaly" phenomenon from season 3 of Enterprise. Something that's light damage and semi-invisible. The barriers from "The Vault" are a good likeness, but I'm still too clumsy with the tools to recreate that sort of effect.

Hey Brenden,

Thanks for the great feedback :cheer:

The vortex effect I used is called "Starburst Effect 01"... however, because it's one of the coolest effects available in the Foundry, it is becoming rather over-used. The floating spirit in the middle is just an alien NPC contact, costumed with 'Infected' base complexion and 'Reflective' eyes, and with its idle animation set to 'Levitate'.

Ali