@Zep & Nick: Yay! I'm really glad you guys liked this. Nick, I was thinking about your suggestions earlier regarding the Foundry, and I have some ideas. I'll get back to you later.
@Mandy: Since you paid for this, your approval is the best of all. I'm really happy you enjoyed it. By the way, right now this exists as a Google Doc that probably needs a little more spelling/grammar check. I plan to go through it, clean it up a little, and get it to you as Word file so that you'll always have it. I'll also be sending you a PM imminently asking your permission for something.
Oh, and I need to say, this was a lot of fun to write and I actually learned some things while doing it. So while Mandy paid for this, I feel like I got the lion's share out of it. Thank you for the challenge, because I think this really helped me grow a bit as a writer. Additionally, I can't wait to get to work on Foundry content and new Pandora stories!